Your Opinion Please.

Dorian Longstreet · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 08 Sep 2010 Posts: 4141

Now for those of you following Expedition. I would like to hear your honest opinion about it. Where we could improve, or if it should stay the way it is.

Your opinion please.
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Hoshiginiro · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 03 Feb 2010 Posts: 6190

we either need some more players or we need some more direction on where the story is going...
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Rune174 · Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 29 May 2009 Posts: 6010

Is this some kind of RP?
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Rune174 · Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 29 May 2009 Posts: 6010

Ah, I have'nt participated in anything since one of my RP partners bailed on me.
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Rune174 · Royal Member of BonBon Joined: 29 May 2009 Posts: 6010

Its ok. I really did enjoy the red panda one we did.
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45dragoons · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 12 Mar 2010 Posts: 4326

i was expecting it to be more trible... and use trying to comunicate with the tribes people. not them al of a sudden speak perfect english, i would expect some but whos there english teacher?? the whole ultamate univiser control thing was a little odd now we have palaces. and also it was just one island but an island chain. well that i dont mind mean new chalanges. also i would think the villagers would get a little fishy about there god of rhoda when there "real"god talich walks in to the village.

i would have liked a more detailed idea of the island. cuase now this island is starting to sould like india.. with tribes people and palaces. and the univise control thing.. that was a tad odd.
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Hoshiginiro · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 03 Feb 2010 Posts: 6190

i wasn't expecting the universe thingy Dorian kinda pulled that out his rear i was just trying to make a reason for them to get attacked by a neighboring tribe...Medel having a premonition about something so special it was worth more then her life *shrug* and not all the tribes people speak English or perfect English harry and Leeanne are ship wrecked people harry could have taught some of the younger tribal people and I'm sure being as the two tribes live in the same island they share information, And some small sentences aren't hard to pick up in the English language. I'm a little surprised there hasn't been a messenger dispatched from each tribe to tell the other of their "find" ...i don't know about you but its hard to makeshift an accent or bad English using typed words Medel is supposed to have an Irish lint to her voice but i cant figure out how to make it look that way in text
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Dorian Longstreet · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 08 Sep 2010 Posts: 4141

It is very hard to try and come up with something more important than anothers life Hoshi. I mean sorry about all that....... but for me it very hard. Though I am sorry this is not as entirely exciting as you would expect............. though there are 7 more islands. All of which have a part to play.

This island itself is rich in resources and plentiful in people. So generally they are able to build places like this. Of course they are more or less temples.

Now Hoshi, you can't generally assume messengers weren't already sent out. You just weren't there to see them.

Besides, I couldn't refuse Medel to see the room. Her being so adamant in her decisions she would have forced the chief into it anyways.
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Goldenweek · Rank: Senior Member Joined: 02 Sep 2010 Posts: 329

it's interesting, but little monotonous
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Dorian Longstreet · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 08 Sep 2010 Posts: 4141

True...... I tend to do that to many of my stories........ this one I simply couldn't resist. Other stories I have different things planned.
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Dorian Longstreet · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 08 Sep 2010 Posts: 4141

I am sorry though.... my mind is a hard thing to follow, but this will probably be my most supernatural RP yet. Probably because of the room, but other reasons as well.
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Wolf Stride · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 18 Dec 2009 Posts: 7678

Hmm.....once I give it a second read, I might join in, mate.
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Dorian Longstreet · Rank: Super Veteran Joined: 08 Sep 2010 Posts: 4141

Alright then
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