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 Holy shit. That's really good. Makes me want to draw again.  But that's besides the point. Keep at it man, I want to hear what happens next.
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Amazing! great work!
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| Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 9:32 pm Post subject: Re: Work in Progress- My Sky and HOPEFULLY Constance Mayflow |
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| BlueHawk82 wrote: | This is where my story left off and for me is the pivitol moment for my character, Sky. He's crash landed in Constance's backyard and is currently where my story left off. Any thoughts? I know I'm not Vanessa but gave it my best so far.
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awsome work
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BlueHawk82
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| Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:48 am Post subject: |
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Hehe, are those croquet items lying around the yard? 
That's a nice touch.
You shouldn't worry about the story being slower paced than others. Set the pace that you want it to have. To be honest, I'm not quite sure how fast paced other stories are around here, as I haven't read that many of them yet.
I don't think that many people here actually read and comment on stories, so it's nothing unusual to not get many comments. Perhaps if you'd include more fursonas it might get more attention, but you shouldn't start making such changes if it's just to get more people to read it. Otherwise I'm not really sure what makes people the most interested in other people's stories. Sex or action/adventure might do it.
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I like the art. The story has a very very unique atmosphere to it when Symphony sits next to Sky. So is he a pilot?
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I personally read the story and enjoyed the way you went about it. But definitely keep it up, because you're doing great work.
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