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Rikardo
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 7:46 am    Post subject: The Nostalgia Smiler - Scruffy Review Reply with quote

I made this first review, and let me tell you, it was hard work for my computer to handle.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z0Zu4Hu3vVE
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 2:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just got finished watching it. I have to say, it was'nt a bad review. Though I have to ask, why the Nostalgia Smiler?
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rune174 wrote:
Just got finished watching it. I have to say, it was'nt a bad review. Though I have to ask, why the Nostalgia Smiler?


1. I like the logo for a new ride that is being made in Alton Towers, called ''The Smiler''

and 2. I am the British version of the Nostalgia Critic.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 3:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fair enough, there were some parts that made me laugh when you ranted on. It only seemed nitpicky, but thats part of being a reviewer.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2013 9:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Hey Ricardo,

Okay, so I watched/listened to your review, and I have a couple of quick thoughts. These are just my opinions, so add three dollars to them, and you can buy a cup of coffee.

1) You need to get a better microphone. The one you have gives off a noticeable "hiss", and well as "chop" sounds. In order to reduce that you might need a studio quality microphone. The ones you get for gaming tend not to worry about that sound.

2) Your voice inflection seems a lot like Robin Leach from "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous". Not sure if you intended that or not.

3) Not sure if it is a British-critique thing, but your timing of "hate-to-love" sorts of switching was more... distracting, than poignant or darkly humorous. On the level of 'whiney-emo-bitch' distracting. I understand the need to vacillate between the two, ala Lewis Black, but your delivery on it needs work.

So, for what it's worth, I hope that helps some. ))
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2013 9:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caroline wrote:
((Hey Ricardo,

Okay, so I watched/listened to your review, and I have a couple of quick thoughts. These are just my opinions, so add three dollars to them, and you can buy a cup of coffee.

1) You need to get a better microphone. The one you have gives off a noticeable "hiss", and well as "chop" sounds. In order to reduce that you might need a studio quality microphone. The ones you get for gaming tend not to worry about that sound.

2) Your voice inflection seems a lot like Robin Leach from "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous". Not sure if you intended that or not.

3) Not sure if it is a British-critique thing, but your timing of "hate-to-love" sorts of switching was more... distracting, than poignant or darkly humorous. On the level of 'whiney-emo-bitch' distracting. I understand the need to vacillate between the two, ala Lewis Black, but your delivery on it needs work.

So, for what it's worth, I hope that helps some. ))


Thanks for the advise, I'm sure to try and use it in future.
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